Mirror to My Soul by Heather Mirassou

A personal blog sharing heartfelt poetry inspired by nature, beauty, and soulful reflection.

d’Verse Prosery Challenge – by Heather Mirassou

The granite and schists of my dark and stubborn country
loomed ahead like a grumpy old giant, arms crossed and
refusing to budge. I had packed only a backpack, a
dubious map, and an overinflated sense of bravery. Rocks
jutted like teeth, trails twisted like pretzels, and every
squirrel seemed to judge my clumsy feet. Somewhere a
goat - or was it a wild-eyed hermit?, bleated a warning. I
slipped, tumbled, and somehow ended up dangling from
a cliff by my shoelaces, like a confused marionette.
Yet, through sheer luck, stubbornness, and an embarrassing
amount of swearing, I found the summit, triumphant.
From up there, the land glared back at me, granite and
schists unyielding, as if saying, " So you've survived. For now"





The first line, “The granite and schists of my dark and stubborn country.” is

from the poem by Nan Shepherd, “The Hill Burns”



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16 responses to “d’Verse Prosery Challenge – by Heather Mirassou”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    This sounds like a very unfriendly landscape… to dangle from a shoelace seems a bit much for me.

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  2. Ruth Pheasant Avatar

    This evoked such vivid images in my mind. And I loved the line about the goat vs wild eyed hermit. I’ve always thought goats sound like old men!

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    1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      Thank you so much Ruth.

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  3. merrildsmith Avatar

    A lively and triumphant piece, and a very, plucky narrator who survived hanging by their shoelaces! I enjoyed all the descriptions–the sharp rocks and pretzel-twisted trails.

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    1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      It was really fun to write. I don’t usually write comedic poetry, but it was worth it!

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      1. merrildsmith Avatar

        I pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for writing to the prompt!

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        1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

          Thank you Merril. Your’s was outstanding!

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        2. Heather Mirassou Avatar

          Thank you Merril. Your’s was outstanding!

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        3. merrildsmith Avatar

          You’re welcome, and thank you!

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  4. Lisa or Li Avatar

    Good descriptions of a hostile landscape. A formidable foe, indeed.

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      1. Lisa or Li Avatar

        You’re welcome, Heather.

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  5. pvcann Avatar

    Ha, I love that ending, dark country indeed, an adventure against the odds too, love it.

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    1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      Awe, then I did my job my friend!

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      1. pvcann Avatar

        ❤️ You certainly did

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