Mirror to My Soul by Heather Mirassou

A personal blog sharing heartfelt poetry inspired by nature, beauty, and soulful reflection.

d’Verse Challenge Dizain Poem

Here is my Dizain Poem:

Ember of the Heart
Love burns in silence, soft as candle flame,
It flickers low yet never fades away,
A breath a glance, and nothing stays the same,
The night turns gold beneath its tender sway
Through storm and shadow hearts will lose their way,
Yet still they circle back, by unseen thread,
To where the first sweet whisper stirred the air,
Love's voice us both the wound and balm it shed,
It breaks us open, teaches how to care,
A fire we fear, yet crave yet crave the heat to bear
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The dizain is a 10-line French poetic form, traditionally composed of a single stanza. It follows a strict rhyme scheme of ABABBCCDCD and typically uses 10 syllables per line. Popularized by French poets in the 15th and 16th centuries, it has also been adapted by English writers.

Structure and characteristics
Stanza: The poem consists of one 10-line stanza.

Syllables: Each line typically contains 10 syllables, often in iambic pentameter. In some instances, poets have used eight syllables per line.

Rhyme scheme: The standard rhyme scheme is ABABBCCDCD, creating a distinct pattern. The second half of the poem (CCDCD) is sometimes noted as a reversal of the first half’s pattern (ABABB), though with new rhyme sounds.

Origin: The dizain originated in France and was embraced by French poets during the 15th and 16th centuries.

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17 responses to “d’Verse Challenge Dizain Poem”

  1. aparnachillycupcakes Avatar

    O Poet, whose own Ember lights the way,
    Your ten-line mirror holds a truth so old!
    With measured step, you master and you play
    The Dizain’s strong form, more precious far than gold.
    Your rhythm flows, a story to unfold.
    The quiet flame, the flicker, soft and low,
    A wound, a balm, the heat we crave to bear—
    These living words with pure intention flow,
    An unseen thread spun of the self-same care
    That makes your vision beautiful and rare.
    My love- Heather ♥️🌷

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    1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      Thank you so much for such a loving response. As usual, you continue to be one of my inspirations to continue writing poetry. I love you dear friend.

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      1. Aparna Avatar

        you know I love you more… Right?

        don’t ever ever loose hope ♥️

        do check your mail… I have sent across a piece of my heart to you ♥️ hope you find it and restore life in it 🤗

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    2. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      I love it, I love it, I love it!

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    3. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      You are truly amazing my friend.

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      1. aparnachillycupcakes Avatar

        The mail which is there is incorrect 🫠
        Send me your id

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  2. destiny Avatar

    beautifully done to the form, Heather…and your words…so well expressed 🤍🌷

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  3. Heather Mirassou Avatar

    Thank Destiny for all your feedback. I really appreciate your comments and your time.

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  4. Kerri Elizabeth Avatar

    I love it.. the facts and structures are interesting as well I sure never even knew any of that.. I write and what comes out is just that 😂.. your details of structure is a new concept for me. Your poem is outstanding!

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    1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      Thank you Kerri. It’s feedback like yours that keeps me writing!

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      1. Kerri Elizabeth Avatar

        Keep writing and keep smiling .. have the best writing day ever.

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    2. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      Oh Kerri you are so kind. It is feedback that keeps me writing. Thank you.

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  5. D. H. Jervis Avatar

    Thanks for the poem and the explanation. I might try one.
    I had an interesting discussion recently with a poet who insisted that forms and structures made better poetry. He had some compelling arguments and they convinced me to take a closer look at writing more strictly.
    This is a very interesting and helpful post. Thanks again.

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  6. Heather Mirassou Avatar

    Well I usually write free verse because I fear Form verse! So, I’m trying something different and I am learning as I go. Give it a try, my fellow poet. I know you will be successful!!

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  7. D. H. Jervis Avatar

    I’m fearful of it too. I guess it can’t hurt to be bold!

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    1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      I’m glad I’m not the only person.

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